This bloghop was organized by Nick Wilford @ Scattergun Scribblings. The entries will be compiled into an anthology to help raise money for his son to attend a specialist college. Please visit Nick's blog and check out the other entries in the bloghop.Thank you for reading.
Flight
Two
men in uniform lifted me from my wheelchair and gently placed me onto one of
four bucket seats in the passenger area, buckling me in securely. The other
passengers were already in their chairs, with palpable excitement reverberating
off the walls of the cabin. We were all winners, chosen for a very special
flight. I looked out the window at the launch pad, hardly able to believe I should
be among them.
The
captain’s voice came over the loudspeaker, welcoming us to Utopia. The engines kicked on and the whole ship pivoted upward,
pushing me back in my seat. The launch pad was nearly gone, enveloped by thick
smoke and sparks from the rockets. A teenage girl strapped into the seat across
from me looked over, grinning widely with a mouth full of white braces. I
couldn’t help but to smile back.
3
. . . 2 . . . 1 . . .
My
hands shook as the rocket left the ground behind—and with it, all I’d been
through since the accident, all the things the doctors said I’d never do again,
and all the walls that had been thrown up around me. When the smoke cleared,
the launch pad, the station, and the city were all within a circle no larger
than a dime dropped in the grass. And then it was gone, swallowed up by the
whole Earth as we left her behind, too.
Clouds
swirled over the continents. City lights illuminated the side hiding from the
sun. And we could see it all in one panoramic view. The sun smoldered in the
nexus of the solar system, and the moon peeked shyly from behind its mother’s
protective stance. A vast blanket of planets, stars, and galaxies stretched out
forever, reaching for Heaven itself.
The
captain announced we had reached our cruising altitude and we were free to move
about the cabin. Everyone but me clapped and cheered. I had no idea where my
wheelchair had been stored during the flight. I’d have to wait to be helped out
of my—
The
girl across from me hastily unbuckled herself and squealed as her chubby body
floated out of her chair. The other two passengers also rose from their chairs
and found themselves swimming through the air, flipping and twirling, dancing
and laughing with gaiety I never believed I’d feel again.
I
fumbled with my buckles, impatient to be released from the confines of my
chair. The girl with braces glided by and extended her hand to me. I took it without
question, and her momentum pulled me effortlessly from my chair. As soon as I
was up, she let go of my hand; and I found myself soaring throughout the cabin
with the other passengers—the other special winners. I reached the window with surprising
ease and gazed out at the celestial perfection. The doctors said I’d probably never
walk again, but they never said anything about flying. So I flew.
An excellently written piece about overcoming the odds to live your dream. Loved the imagery in this too, so evocative. Thank you very much for taking part, Michael!
ReplyDeleteYou certainly made a smile spring onto my face as I neared the end of the piece!
ReplyDeleteThat is really special! Now that's the ultimate Make a Wish. (Although obviously the kids aren't dying.) Good stuff, Michael.
ReplyDeleteI just got chills! Great job!! To be able to fly when you can't walk, what a great gift.
ReplyDeleteThis is actually my dream come true - to go up in a rocket and float :) Beautiful story!
ReplyDeleteI have dreamed with this so many times. Good writing!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love seeing all the creativity of this challenge!
This is awesome! I love that he gets to fly!!! Sweet!
ReplyDeleteI love this story. I've always wanted to fly. This is the ultimate in overcoming a disability.
ReplyDeleteNo way! I wrote a ship called Utopia, too. Fancy that!
ReplyDeleteThis was great, Michael! :)
Thanks for sharing. I'm glad the narrator found a way to challenge the doctor's diagnosis in spite of his situation.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing! I love that he found a way~ :D
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Brilliant, can't walk but can fly, a lovely, positive story.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story. I love how he overcame his barriers!
ReplyDeleteYour entry brought tears to my eyes. The neighbors I grew up with were a married couple, one quadriplegic and one paraplegic. Some of our best times shared together were in their swimming pool where they were able to move about almost as freely as my brother and I... but I would have never thought to write a story about them experiencing weightlessness is space. Well done, Sir.
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